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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Because it has a wide grass and located to the river. I can do many thing such as lying on the grass, riding a bicycle, riding a cruise.
people usually eat a chiken at Hangang park. I like to ride a tandem bicycle. Because I can't ride a bicycle. River breeze on the bicycle makes me feel good.
Last summer, we went to the park, we riding a crusise. And we watched a fireworks display on the cruise. It was very fantastic.
But every time we went there, not only it cost a lot of money but also it takes time to go to restaurants. What I like most about spaghetti is Vongole Spaghetti. I used to find the recipe on the internet.
I hate to open my photo to the public. Because I'm worried about an invasion of privacy.
SNS is a little botherd. I have been try to it, but I gave up soon. Because it takes long time to write a blog. I'm very busy these days due to job seeking. I have no time to the SNS. Insted , I use kakao talks to communicate with my friends.
people usually eat a chiken at Hangang park. I like to ride a tandem bicycle. Because I can't ride a bicycle. River breeze on the bicycle makes me feel good.
Last summer, we went to the park, we riding a crusise. And we watched a fireworks display on the cruise. It was very fantastic.
But every time we went there, not only it cost a lot of money but also it takes time to go to restaurants. What I like most about spaghetti is Vongole Spaghetti. I used to find the recipe on the internet.
I hate to open my photo to the public. Because I'm worried about an invasion of privacy.
SNS is a little botherd. I have been try to it, but I gave up soon. Because it takes long time to write a blog. I'm very busy these days due to job seeking. I have no time to the SNS. Insted , I use kakao talks to communicate with my friends.
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