My episode!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I visited to Hongkong with my mother and one daughter four years ago.
By the way I had a some problem at Airport of Hongkong.
When I find my baggage, I lost my mother. I asked to a security guard around there.
" Please Help me, My mother lost here now.
She is korean and 67 years old. Also, She is wearing yellow jumper and had shot black hair.
So, I and my daugher started finding her at all around Airport.
Fortunately, I found her after 30 minute who she is waiting us at out of the Airport
By the way I had a some problem at Airport of Hongkong.
When I find my baggage, I lost my mother. I asked to a security guard around there.
" Please Help me, My mother lost here now.
She is korean and 67 years old. Also, She is wearing yellow jumper and had shot black hair.
So, I and my daugher started finding her at all around Airport.
Fortunately, I found her after 30 minute who she is waiting us at out of the Airport
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