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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 10 조회 13460

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작성자: 1102241791 담당 튜터: Edna1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The website that I visit most often is Naver. Naver is simiral to Google and the biggest portal site in Korea. I can get all the information there. For example, I always search a famous restaurant before I go on a date. Also, I search about all the things which I want to buy in advance before I go shopping. Because I want to buy good products at reasonable price. Plus, I can get the information about employment. It is very useful.
Another website that I visit most often is online shopping mall. I often enjoy Internet shopping.
Since I can do at home without having to fo far. It is very convenient. Also, It is possible to compare prices on the internet. So I can buy stuffs more cheaply than offline shops. Thus, I like internet shopping.
That's why I like to surfing the internet. I think I can't live a single day without Internet.
튜터 교정 답변

The website that I visit most often is Naver. Naver is simiral similar to Google and the biggest portal site in Korea. I can get all the information there. For example, I always search a famous restaurant before I go on a date. Also, I search about all the things which I want to buy in advance before I go shopping. Because I want to buy good products at reasonable price. Plus, I can get the information about employment. It is very useful. Another website that I visit most often is online shopping mall. I often enjoy Internet shopping. Since I can do at home without having to fo far going out. It is very convenient. Also, It is possible to compare prices on the internet. So I can buy stuffs more cheaply cheaper than offline shops. Thus, I like internet shopping. That's why I like to surfing the internet. I think I can't live a single day without Internet.

Hi Irene , 

I appreciate your effort to write about the things that we talked about in our class.

Anyway, I heard about that website NAVER. Thanks you for sharing. Maybe I can visit that site, too.

Teacher Edna

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