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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I work for SamsungSDS which is the subsidiary company of Samsung group.
It is a big-sized company and was founded in 1985
and has been so far about 30 years
and there are about 15,000 employees.
It ranks top in the IT service in the Korean market.
We mainly support other Samsung subsidary company such as Samsung electronics.
As you know Samsung electronics has been making Galaxy phone and digitalTV.
My job is SW engineer for digitalTV in there.
My workplace is the R&D center of samsung electronics in Suwon City.
The place is very large and it is only for samsung company.
There are three tall buildings of R&D center.
In July, 2 twin buildings were established.
This area has many parks, restaurants, sport center, soccer fields
and many people take a walk after lunch.
I get to the office at around 9 a.m.
As soon as I sit on my chair, usually check the urgent e-mails.
After that take a coffee break.
I'm a general manager and manage 60 employees under me.
If you come to my office, the first thing you will notice is the digital-TV
and there are computer, fax machine, printer, projector, stationery
and DTV as developing sample.
I really satisfied with what I do and the people I work with.
It is a big-sized company and was founded in 1985
and has been so far about 30 years
and there are about 15,000 employees.
It ranks top in the IT service in the Korean market.
We mainly support other Samsung subsidary company such as Samsung electronics.
As you know Samsung electronics has been making Galaxy phone and digitalTV.
My job is SW engineer for digitalTV in there.
My workplace is the R&D center of samsung electronics in Suwon City.
The place is very large and it is only for samsung company.
There are three tall buildings of R&D center.
In July, 2 twin buildings were established.
This area has many parks, restaurants, sport center, soccer fields
and many people take a walk after lunch.
I get to the office at around 9 a.m.
As soon as I sit on my chair, usually check the urgent e-mails.
After that take a coffee break.
I'm a general manager and manage 60 employees under me.
If you come to my office, the first thing you will notice is the digital-TV
and there are computer, fax machine, printer, projector, stationery
and DTV as developing sample.
I really satisfied with what I do and the people I work with.
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