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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 12 조회 15723

My Favorite movie.

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My Favorite movie is X-man. Hue Jackman starred in the movie. This movie is one of the marvel comics. There are many characters who have supernatural power. I love to show a powerful action and variable mutations. The best impressive scene is that Storm controls the weather. Also Wolverine is immoral. I want to get a power like them. I hope to watch new series of X-man.
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My Favorite movie is X-men. Hue Jackman starred in the movie. This movie is one of the famous marvel comics. There are many characters who have supernatural power. I love to see those powerful action and variable mutations. The best impressive scene is when Storm controls the weather. Also Wolverine is immortal. I want to have a power like them. I hope to watch new series of X-men.

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