homework 20150518
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Jinjoo: Let's move to the 7th floor where our General Affairs Department is.
Daeho: What are their main tasks?
Jinjoo: They are involved in facility maintenance, office supply and security control.
Daeho: Do they repair furniture, when it has been broken down?
Jinjoo: Correct, all repairs are included in their tasks.
Daeho: Does the repair of computers constitute a part of their tasks?
Jinjoo: That is not their job. It belongs to the IT department's work scope.
Daeho: I see. I appreciate your clear explanation.
Daeho: What are their main tasks?
Jinjoo: They are involved in facility maintenance, office supply and security control.
Daeho: Do they repair furniture, when it has been broken down?
Jinjoo: Correct, all repairs are included in their tasks.
Daeho: Does the repair of computers constitute a part of their tasks?
Jinjoo: That is not their job. It belongs to the IT department's work scope.
Daeho: I see. I appreciate your clear explanation.
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