domestic travel
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I can see many parm trees at Jeju airport as soon as I arrived. It’s very exotic, so I feel like I am in another country when I visit there.
After eating, we look around the tourist attractions in the city. And we take pictures together from place to place. Because after travelling looking at the pictures, they bring my memories back. Also, I especially like to experience myself such as riding a horse, jetskiing, yachting, snorkeling in the tourist attractions.
when I finish my trip, I usually buy regional specialties for my families or friends.
To make matters worse, my cell phone battery was dead and my friend left it at the hotel room. If I don’t have a smartphone, I can’t find a direction. Thankfully, I asked a passerby the way to the Hotel, I managed to find a direction to get to the hotel. Looking back on it, I was so worried at that time because I was lost on some unfamiliar street. But now I can laugh at what happened on that day.
After eating, we look around the tourist attractions in the city. And we take pictures together from place to place. Because after travelling looking at the pictures, they bring my memories back. Also, I especially like to experience myself such as riding a horse, jetskiing, yachting, snorkeling in the tourist attractions.
when I finish my trip, I usually buy regional specialties for my families or friends.
To make matters worse, my cell phone battery was dead and my friend left it at the hotel room. If I don’t have a smartphone, I can’t find a direction. Thankfully, I asked a passerby the way to the Hotel, I managed to find a direction to get to the hotel. Looking back on it, I was so worried at that time because I was lost on some unfamiliar street. But now I can laugh at what happened on that day.
튜터 교정 답변
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