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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 19 조회 13090

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작성자: 1102241791 담당 튜터: Edna1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I normally stay home for my vacation. This is because I can’t be bothered to go far away from my house. During the semester, I am so busy doing lots of assignments and can’t get enough sleep. So, I like to overslept while on vacation.
I also hang out with my friend, so I invite my friends over and have a lot of fun. we often watch reruns of our favorite tv shows such as korean reality show titled ‘reckless challenges’. Sometimes, we go shopping, play online games or watch a movie. But you know, I prefer staying home to going outside.

I also phone and speak english every morning.


Hi, Edna. I’m glad to hear your voice every morning. I will take the opic test this weekend. So I’m making my opic script. But, to talk about my experience in English is somewhat difficult. I wonder grammer of a sentence that I have made is correct. In fact, I am with the help of the translation software. Please try to understand any of writing a variety of topics.
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I normally stay home for my vacation. This is because I can’t be bothered to go far away from my house. During the semester, I am so busy doing lots of assignments and can’t get enough sleep. So, I like to oversleep overslept while on vacation. I also hang out with my friend, so I invite my friends over and have a lot of fun. we often watch reruns of our favorite tv shows such as korean reality show titled ‘reckless challenges’. Sometimes, we go shopping, play online games or watch a movie. But you know, I prefer staying home to going outside. I also phone and speak english every morning. Hi, Edna. I’m glad to hear your voice every morning. I will take the opic test this weekend. So I’m making my opic script. But, to talk about my experience in English is somewhat  somehow difficult. I wonder grammer a of a sentence that I have made is correct. In fact, I am with the help of the translation software. Please try to understand any of writing a variety of topics.

 

Ps.

Are you asking for certain topic everyday for your writing, Ms Irene?

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