homework 20150519
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
What are the main tasks of the Accounting Department?
Collection, Payment, Bookkeeping are within their remit.
Do they lend money to employees?
They don't lend money. But they facilitate bank loans for employees, when they are requested.
What good news it is! Can they do it for me?
I don't think so. Such bank loans are on the security of employee’s severance pay.
That means I should work for more than a year. I need to borrow money for renting a studio.
You had better meet the head of the Accounting Department. He may have a solution for you.
Collection, Payment, Bookkeeping are within their remit.
Do they lend money to employees?
They don't lend money. But they facilitate bank loans for employees, when they are requested.
What good news it is! Can they do it for me?
I don't think so. Such bank loans are on the security of employee’s severance pay.
That means I should work for more than a year. I need to borrow money for renting a studio.
You had better meet the head of the Accounting Department. He may have a solution for you.
튜터 교정 답변
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