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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 19 조회 13581

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I am always punctual. But, I’ve almost late for my intern interview. So, I’d like to tell you about the time when I had to hurry on my way to interviewing place.
Actually, I usually can’t find direction. So, I nomally take ages to find direction.
Interviewing place was far from my house. I took the subway and it took an hour and a half to get there. I got off subway on the right station but I went out the wrong exit. So, I wandered from a long time near the interviewing place. In the end, I asked a passerby the way to there. Thankfully I arrived just in time for my interview. Because my turn was backward. After such an experience, I always find my way with my smartphone in advance before I hit the road.

We just went to a department store and shopping until late. And actually I haven’t finished watching Frozen yet.
There are a variety of parties held in Double Nine and my friend and I go there to enjoy those parties.
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I am always punctual. But, I’ve almost late for my intern interview. So, I’d like to tell you about the time when I had to hurry on my way to interviewing place. Actually, I usually can’t find direction. So, I normally take ages to find direction. Interviewing place was far from my house. I took the subway and it took an hour and a half to get there. I got off subway on the right station but I went out the wrong exit. So, I wandered from a long time near the interviewing place. In the end, I asked a passerby the way to there. Thankfully I arrived just in time for my interview. Because my turn was backward. After such an experience, I always find my way with my smartphone in advance before I hit the road. We just went to a department store and shopping until late. And actually I haven’t finished watching Frozen yet. There are a variety of parties held in Double Nine and my friend and I go there to enjoy those parties.

 

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Good writing for today !

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