looking for the right person
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
* Teacher, Please don't hesitate to correct all the words or expressions from me.
* If changing some words could be more natural with not harming my sentence structure, please suggest me. If there are more nice expression, changing whole the structure would be nice.
Hello, this is James with Samsung in Korea.
May I speak to the person in charge of the sales department?
(somebody come out)
Hey, this is James with Samsung in Korea.
We found your company on the Internet.
We were looking for the security camera which will be used for our project in Indonesia.
And it seems like that your products are very fit to our purpose.
But unfortunately, I can't found out the e-mail address of sales representitive.
So, May I ask your email address? I can tell you more about our inquiries.
(after receiving the email address)
OK. thanks a lot. I'll send you a mail right after a minute.
Take it easy. bye.
* If changing some words could be more natural with not harming my sentence structure, please suggest me. If there are more nice expression, changing whole the structure would be nice.
Hello, this is James with Samsung in Korea.
May I speak to the person in charge of the sales department?
(somebody come out)
Hey, this is James with Samsung in Korea.
We found your company on the Internet.
We were looking for the security camera which will be used for our project in Indonesia.
And it seems like that your products are very fit to our purpose.
But unfortunately, I can't found out the e-mail address of sales representitive.
So, May I ask your email address? I can tell you more about our inquiries.
(after receiving the email address)
OK. thanks a lot. I'll send you a mail right after a minute.
Take it easy. bye.
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