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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 21 조회 12686

UNIT 06. Internet

작성자: 1100048742 담당 튜터: Ned
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most visit site is searching site and next site is funny site.
Nomorly Most famous searching site is google, but naver is most famous in korea
Naver have 80% user, google take only 2% in korea,
Foces searching on Google but naver operated total web service not only searching but also mail, schauel, SNS etc.
I Specially used to two function that 지식IN and SNS
first, 지식In is knowledge database on user's QnA
Someone posted queston, another user answer.
If good answer, recommend auther people like facesbook like button
Second, SNS userd share college friend, coworker's notice
And funny site have text and movie
Doing read text and view movie for killing time whenever I'm boarding.
튜터 교정 답변

The most visited sites are searching sites and the next would be funny sites. Normally, the most famous searching site is Google, but Naver is most famous in Korea. Naver has 80% user and Google takes only 2% in Korea. Forces searching on Google but Naver operated total web service not only for searching but also school emails, SNS etc. I Specially used two function that IN and SNS has. IN is a knowledge database on user's Q&A. Someone posted a question and another user answers. If it's a good answer, other people recommend it on Facebook with a like button. Second, Facebook SNS use a share button for you to share it and notice by your college friends and coworkers. And finally, funny sites has articles and movie clips where I can read and watch to kill time whenever I'm board.

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