UNIT 06. Internet
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most visit site is searching site and next site is funny site.
Nomorly Most famous searching site is google, but naver is most famous in korea
Naver have 80% user, google take only 2% in korea,
Foces searching on Google but naver operated total web service not only searching but also mail, schauel, SNS etc.
I Specially used to two function that 지식IN and SNS
first, 지식In is knowledge database on user's QnA
Someone posted queston, another user answer.
If good answer, recommend auther people like facesbook like button
Second, SNS userd share college friend, coworker's notice
And funny site have text and movie
Doing read text and view movie for killing time whenever I'm boarding.
Nomorly Most famous searching site is google, but naver is most famous in korea
Naver have 80% user, google take only 2% in korea,
Foces searching on Google but naver operated total web service not only searching but also mail, schauel, SNS etc.
I Specially used to two function that 지식IN and SNS
first, 지식In is knowledge database on user's QnA
Someone posted queston, another user answer.
If good answer, recommend auther people like facesbook like button
Second, SNS userd share college friend, coworker's notice
And funny site have text and movie
Doing read text and view movie for killing time whenever I'm boarding.
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