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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 21 조회 14346

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작성자: 1102241791 담당 튜터: Edna1
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I go to the language school called Hakers to study English. Hackers is the most famous English institutes in Korea. Therefore, There are always many people. So, If I don’t register early, some popular lecture has been closed. ( I mean fully booked.... is it correct expression?) So, I have to hurry for registration.
A friend recommended that language school to me, I attend that academy.
It’s located near the gangnam station exit 10 in Seoul.

My mom told me that I learned dancing by watching TV stars. I have never taken the formal lessons.

I usually go to my favorite singer’s concert.

And what you do for me to make up for it? The ticket system spoiled our weekend.
튜터 교정 답변

I go went to the a language school called Hakers to study English. Hackers is the most famous English institutes in Korea. Therefore, there are many students enrolled on that school. There are always many people. So, If I don’t register early, some popular lecture has been closed. ( I mean fully booked.... is it correct expression ? .. has been closed is okay ) So, I have to hurry for registration. A friend recommended that language school to me, I attend that academy. It’s located near the gangnam station exit 10 in Seoul. My mom told me that I learned dancing by watching TV stars. I have never taken the formal lessons. I usually go to my favorite singer’s concert. And what would you do for me to make up for it? The ticket system spoiled our weekend.

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