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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The objective of this document is to describe the ICT system design work for the Resort World Jeju project (herein after referred to as “RWS Jeju”), especially Area A ( Hotel and Casino) and Theme park. RWS Jeju will be Jeju’s largest family theme park and one of Korea’s most exciting themed complexes, and Samsung SDS will provide the process of creating a robust ICT infrastructure with integrated security solutions for the Hotel, Casino and Theme Park, and which will support and enhance RWS project.
튜터 교정 답변
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