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Drawing up the contract

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Title : Drawing up the contract

Hello! Tomas.

I am James Lee with Samsung in Korea.
I am in charge of procurement.
First of all, thank you for all of your consideration and great support for our asking.
Finally our legal review for the contract has finished.
I attached the copy.
So, please review the contract again, and if there are not more issues,
I'd like to draw up the contract as soon as possible.
According to the article 9, we can regard the fax copy or electrical copy with sign as original.
So, After your confirmation, I will send the signed copy as PDF file format.
It would be appreciated that you send it back right after signing.
Thanks for your cooperation.

Best Regards,
James Lee

* Rebecca, we can review this text line by line in our class.
튜터 교정 답변

Title : Drawing up the contract Hello! Tomas. I am James Lee with Samsung in Korea. I am in charge of procurement. First of all, thank you for all of your consideration and great support for our asking. Finally our legal review for the contract has finished. I attached the copy. So, please review the contract again, and if there are not more issues, I'd like to draw up the contract as soon as possible. According to the article 9, we can regard the fax copy or electrical copy with sign as original. So, After your confirmation, I will send the signed copy as PDF file format. It would be appreciated that you send it back right after signing. Thanks for your cooperation. Best Regards, James Lee * Rebecca, we can review this text line by line in our class.

Hello, Thomas! This is James Lee with Samsung in Korea. I am in charge of procurement. First of all, thank you for your time and consideration. We have finalized the contract and I've attached a copy. Please review the contract and if all looks good, I'd like to go ahead and sign. According to Article 9 - we can accept a faxed or electronic copy that is signed as the original. After you've confirmed, I will send the signed copy as a PDF file. Please sign it and send back at your earliest convenience. Thanks again for all of your cooperation. Best regards,

James Lee

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