Fixing my new house
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Title : Fixing my new house
I had three days of holiday last weekend. Monday was the birthday of Buddha.
Since I had a long holiday, I decided to fix the sink of my new house instead of buying a new one.
The hood of the sink was terribly polluted. On the surface of the hood, Oid was formed excessively.
I thought that the older tenant was absorbed in cooking chinese food or oily one.
Anyway I disassembed the hood and started to wash it with baking soda and vinagar.
But it was the start of tragedy. At first, I thought that it would be finished in no time.
It was an illusion. It took a whole two days of my holiday. I had nosebleed two times really.
And finally, when I installed it in place, it worked nicely.
But even I turned off it, after time goes by, it was turned on for itself.
It was a kind of horrible thing. I realize that I blew my golden holidays.
I had three days of holiday last weekend. Monday was the birthday of Buddha.
Since I had a long holiday, I decided to fix the sink of my new house instead of buying a new one.
The hood of the sink was terribly polluted. On the surface of the hood, Oid was formed excessively.
I thought that the older tenant was absorbed in cooking chinese food or oily one.
Anyway I disassembed the hood and started to wash it with baking soda and vinagar.
But it was the start of tragedy. At first, I thought that it would be finished in no time.
It was an illusion. It took a whole two days of my holiday. I had nosebleed two times really.
And finally, when I installed it in place, it worked nicely.
But even I turned off it, after time goes by, it was turned on for itself.
It was a kind of horrible thing. I realize that I blew my golden holidays.
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