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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 26 조회 13524

Fixing my new house

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
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Title : Fixing my new house

I had three days of holiday last weekend. Monday was the birthday of Buddha.
Since I had a long holiday, I decided to fix the sink of my new house instead of buying a new one.
The hood of the sink was terribly polluted. On the surface of the hood, Oid was formed excessively.
I thought that the older tenant was absorbed in cooking chinese food or oily one.
Anyway I disassembed the hood and started to wash it with baking soda and vinagar.
But it was the start of tragedy. At first, I thought that it would be finished in no time.
It was an illusion. It took a whole two days of my holiday. I had nosebleed two times really.
And finally, when I installed it in place, it worked nicely.
But even I turned off it, after time goes by, it was turned on for itself.
It was a kind of horrible thing. I realize that I blew my golden holidays.
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Title : Fixing my new house I had three days of holiday last weekend. Monday was the birthday of Buddha. Since I had a long holiday, I decided to fix the sink of my new house instead of buying a new one. The hood of the sink was terribly polluted. On the surface of the hood, Oid was formed excessively. I thought that the older tenant was absorbed in cooking chinese food or oily one. Anyway I disassembed the hood and started to wash it with baking soda and vinagar. But it was the start of tragedy. At first, I thought that it would be finished in no time. It was an illusion. It took a whole two days of my holiday. I had nosebleed two times really. And finally, when I installed it in place, it worked nicely. But even I turned off it, after time goes by, it was turned on for itself. It was a kind of horrible thing. I realize that I blew my golden holidays.

This past weekend was a three day holiday weekend for Buddha's birthday. Since I had a long holiday, I decided to fix the kitchen hood in my new house instead of buying a new one. The inside of the hood was filthy. There was excessive oil on the hood's surface. I figured the previous tenant cooked Chinese food or oily food extensively. Anyway, I disassembled the hood and washed it with baking soda and vinegar. I figured it would be finished in no time, but this was just the beginning. It took up two days of my holiday. I had two nosebleeds. Finally, when I reinstalled it, it seemed to work nicely; however, even though I turned it off, it kept turning back on automatically. It was horrible and I realized I had blown my holiday weekend.

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