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Today, our first class ^^

작성자: 1102162067 담당 튜터: Julie
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Dear Julies!

Hello, nice to meet you!

I'm Mark Lee.

Today, I'm afraid of English conversation.

But, I tring to speak English hardly.

Thank you so much for you favor.

Thank you
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Julie! Hello, nice to meet you! I'm Mark Lee. Today, I'm afraid of having English conversation. But, I'm trying to speak English with difficulty. Thank you so much for your favor.

 

Hello Mark. Don't worry about your English skills. I'll be glad to help you.  I'm looking forward to talk with you in the class. Take care always!

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