Hello over there
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Title : Hello over there
(We made a SNS in our intranet to communicate between our local subsidiary.
Every personnel like me at HQ in Korea might be matched with a co-worker in subsidiary)
Hello. I am James Lee in Korea.
Nice to see you.
I hope this small step for our communication might be helpful to our closeness and cooperation.
Because we have limited access to your legion, we might be dependant on you when we run a business at your area.
And I am very happy by the expectation that this will broaden our sight on each country's characteristic.
I hope we'll have get in contact often.
See you soon.
(We made a SNS in our intranet to communicate between our local subsidiary.
Every personnel like me at HQ in Korea might be matched with a co-worker in subsidiary)
Hello. I am James Lee in Korea.
Nice to see you.
I hope this small step for our communication might be helpful to our closeness and cooperation.
Because we have limited access to your legion, we might be dependant on you when we run a business at your area.
And I am very happy by the expectation that this will broaden our sight on each country's characteristic.
I hope we'll have get in contact often.
See you soon.
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