Hello Jasmine
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
If you are ok,I would like to write anything related to my routine as much as possible.
So, for the start up,
Today I just kept working in power plant for fixing troubles.
In addition, I attended a meeting, called "control system modification" in order to enhance effiency.
I guess it is quite good enough for start-up..^^
Thanks,
Hoyoung Kim,
So, for the start up,
Today I just kept working in power plant for fixing troubles.
In addition, I attended a meeting, called "control system modification" in order to enhance effiency.
I guess it is quite good enough for start-up..^^
Thanks,
Hoyoung Kim,
튜터 교정 답변
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