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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 03 조회 12878

To commute to office

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Title : To commute to the office

(As long as the meaning is not weird or not natural, it would be better to use my word at the most.
So I can see the usage of the expression.)

I get up early in the morning to avoid the competitors on the road.
In Korea, most people use the public tranfer to go to the work.
Because it is cheaper than driving a car and it is more punctual.
But in my case, it is not that good solution due to the long commute distance.
Sometimes, I pull up my car at the parks next to the river on my way to the office.
And I close my eyes and smell the smell of the morning and the full happiness of going to work.
As like you, I always enjoy commuting to work.
I don't think that you believe this text as true.
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Title : To commute to the office (As long as the meaning is not weird or not natural, it would be better to use my word at the most. So I can see the usage of the expression.) I get up early in the morning to avoid the competitors on the road. In Korea, most people use the public tranfer to go to the work. Because it is cheaper than driving a car and it is more punctual. But in my case, it is not that good solution due to the long commute distance. Sometimes, I pull up my car at the parks next to the river on my way to the office. And I close my eyes and smell the smell of the morning and the full happiness of going to work. As like you, I always enjoy commuting to work. I don't think that you believe this text as true.

Commuting to the office. ...I get up early in the morning to avoid traffic. In Korea, most people take public transportation to go to work because it is cheaper than driving a car and it is more punctual. But in my case, it is not that good of a solution due to the long commute. Sometimes, I pull over in the park next to the river on my way to the office. I close my eyes and take in the smell of the morning and feel the joy of going to work. As like you, I always enjoy commuting to work. I don't think you believe this text is true.

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