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requests for correction 3

작성자: pos600195 담당 튜터: Katharine2
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10. Hello, this is danny, hotel manager.
I'm calling to respond you about your message that you need more staffs to accommodate clients that night.
I think It'll be no problem to find them.
Just let me know how many people you need that night and until what time they should be arrived.
I'll contact ABC agency once you tell me about it..
I hope you are satisfied with my suggestion.
Please feel free to call me if you need more help. Thank you.
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10. Hello, this is danny, hotel manager. I'm calling to respond to you about your message (or, I'm calling in response to your message) that you need more staffs to accommodate clients that night. I think It'll be no problem to find them. Just let me know how many people you need that night and until what time they should be arriveddismissed. I'll contact ABC agency once you tell me about it.. I hope you are satisfied with my suggestion. Please feel free to call me if you need more help. Thank you.

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