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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 04 조회 13503

Second diary

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Katelyn1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today, I had lunch with my company friend.
We went to a restaurant that is located near our company.
She was the first time that she has lunch there.
I recommended her the restaurant.
But I was not sure that she would like it although I like that restaurant's food.
Fortunately, she was satisfied with it.
Because the food was so delicious.

After finishing work, I met my business partner.
Actually, he gives me a lot of information that I need when I make a report.
He is very helpful to me.
That's why I treated him dinner!

And then I came back home. I felt sleepy.
So I slept early.
튜터 교정 답변

I went to a restuartant today with a co-worker that was near our office. I suggested the restaurant because of its delicious food. I was so happy that she enjoyed it and found the food to be just as delicious as I did.

 

I met my business partner after work. He often gives me a lot of useful and helpful information that I use on reports for work. His information is so helpful and his advise is so useful that I even treated him to dinner.

I went home after dinner and went to bed because I was so tired.

 

 

Today, I had lunch with my company friend. We went to a restaurant that is located near our company. She was the first time that she has lunch there. I recommended her the restaurant. But I was not sure that she would like it although I like that restaurant's food. Fortunately, she was satisfied with it. Because the food was so delicious. After finishing work, I met my business partner. Actually, he gives me a lot of information that I need when I make a report. He is very helpful to me. That's why I treated him dinner! And then I came back home. I felt sleepy. So I slept early.

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