Second diary
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Today, I had lunch with my company friend.
We went to a restaurant that is located near our company.
She was the first time that she has lunch there.
I recommended her the restaurant.
But I was not sure that she would like it although I like that restaurant's food.
Fortunately, she was satisfied with it.
Because the food was so delicious.
After finishing work, I met my business partner.
Actually, he gives me a lot of information that I need when I make a report.
He is very helpful to me.
That's why I treated him dinner!
And then I came back home. I felt sleepy.
So I slept early.
We went to a restaurant that is located near our company.
She was the first time that she has lunch there.
I recommended her the restaurant.
But I was not sure that she would like it although I like that restaurant's food.
Fortunately, she was satisfied with it.
Because the food was so delicious.
After finishing work, I met my business partner.
Actually, he gives me a lot of information that I need when I make a report.
He is very helpful to me.
That's why I treated him dinner!
And then I came back home. I felt sleepy.
So I slept early.
튜터 교정 답변
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