1st writing
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hey my buddy
I arrived at a department just now.
Luckly, I had a seat in a subway on my way to work.
A subway is well installed at Korea.
But it changed to the dense subway called hall subway during the office-going hour.
So whenever foreigners take a subway during the office-going hour , they got shock.
So It really the good luck to sit on the subway seat and go to work.
I arrived at a department just now.
Luckly, I had a seat in a subway on my way to work.
A subway is well installed at Korea.
But it changed to the dense subway called hall subway during the office-going hour.
So whenever foreigners take a subway during the office-going hour , they got shock.
So It really the good luck to sit on the subway seat and go to work.
튜터 교정 답변
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