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SANG-NAM-JA

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
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Title : SANG-NAM-JA

Hello there!
This is SANG-NAM-JA from Gimpo city in Korea.
SANG-NAM-JA means a guy who has the super power and is great great cool.
(SANG-NAM-JA and the super power is the fad word in Korea recently)
If you have any trouble in your life, call me anytime, anywhere.
I'll be there with you.
If we have co-work if only once, then I'll buy a meal for you when you come to Korea.
Not a group, but just for you whoever you are.
Anyway, Nice to meet you.
I hope that I may really meet you before the end of the world.
Take it easy, bye.
튜터 교정 답변

Title : SANG-NAM-JA Hello there! This is SANG-NAM-JA from Gimpo city in Korea. SANG-NAM-JA means a guy who has the super power and is great great cool. (SANG-NAM-JA and the super power is the fad word in Korea recently) If you have any trouble in your life, call me anytime, anywhere. I'll be there with you. If we have co-work if only once, then I'll buy a meal for you when you come to Korea. Not a group, but just for you whoever you are. Anyway, Nice to meet you. I hope that I may really meet you before the end of the world. Take it easy, bye.

SANG-NAM-JA Hello there! This is SANG-NAM-JA from Gimpo City in Korea. SANG-NAM-JA means a guy who has super powers and is very, very cool. (SANG-NAM-JA and the super power is a fad word recently in Korea.) If you have any trouble in your life, call me anytime, anywhere. I'll be there for you. If we work together just once, then I'll buy you a meal when you come to Korea. Not a group, but just for you, whoever you are. Anyway, nice to meet you. I hope that I can meet you before the end of the world. Take it easy. Bye.

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