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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 07 조회 13831

It was a long weekend

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Title : It was a long weekend

I did some works in my new house. The works was only for saving money.
At first, I planned to change all the tiles on the balcony. It costs around 1,000 dollars.
But after I washed up the balcony, it looked not too bad. So I decided not to invest into the tiles.
And I cleaned up all the vertical blind. I pulled it off the frame, and dipped it in a large basin with detergent. And I hung again the blind on their place.
During the blind was in a basin, I did the painting on the kitchen glass door.
Painting took around 3 hours, but not finished yet.
I thought that how the labor workers make a hard living.
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Title : It was a long weekend I did some works in my new house. The works was only for saving money. At first, I planned to change all the tiles on the balcony. It costs around 1,000 dollars. But after I washed up the balcony, it looked not too bad. So I decided not to invest into the tiles. And I cleaned up all the vertical blind. I pulled it off the frame, and dipped it in a large basin with detergent. And I hung again the blind on their place. During the blind was in a basin, I did the painting on the kitchen glass door. Painting took around 3 hours, but not finished yet. I thought that how the labor workers make a hard living.

It was a long weekend. I did some work around my new house to save money. I originally had planned to change the tiles on the balcony but it would cost around $1,000. However, after I washed the balcony, I decided I could live with it. I also cleaned the vertical blinds. I pulled them off the frame and dipped them into a large basin with detergent. Afterwards, I rehung them. While the blinds were washing, I painted around the kitchen glass door. It took around 3 hours and it's not finished yet. I thought about how laborers make a hard living.

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