It was a long weekend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Title : It was a long weekend
I did some works in my new house. The works was only for saving money.
At first, I planned to change all the tiles on the balcony. It costs around 1,000 dollars.
But after I washed up the balcony, it looked not too bad. So I decided not to invest into the tiles.
And I cleaned up all the vertical blind. I pulled it off the frame, and dipped it in a large basin with detergent. And I hung again the blind on their place.
During the blind was in a basin, I did the painting on the kitchen glass door.
Painting took around 3 hours, but not finished yet.
I thought that how the labor workers make a hard living.
I did some works in my new house. The works was only for saving money.
At first, I planned to change all the tiles on the balcony. It costs around 1,000 dollars.
But after I washed up the balcony, it looked not too bad. So I decided not to invest into the tiles.
And I cleaned up all the vertical blind. I pulled it off the frame, and dipped it in a large basin with detergent. And I hung again the blind on their place.
During the blind was in a basin, I did the painting on the kitchen glass door.
Painting took around 3 hours, but not finished yet.
I thought that how the labor workers make a hard living.
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