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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 08 조회 13675

check out, photo, intered

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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As soon as after checed out our hotel,
we went to the moutain located near by the hotel.
Becaruse we are so intered in taking photo and we've heard that place is awesome.
튜터 교정 답변

After checking out of our hotel, we went to the moutain which is located near the hotel becaruse we are so interested in taking photo and we've heard that the place is awesome.

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