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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 08 조회 13910

The reason why I make sentences in english!

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Katelyn1
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I made some sentences to answer my teacher's questions.
Actually when I start to make them, at first it is not easy.
I don't know how I speak my thoughts in english.
But, after I make just one sentences, I can make a pharagrah very quickly.
What a interesting!
However, I'm not sure that I can speak english without making sentences before speaking.
I think I need more practices.
I expect myself to speak what I think in english simultaneously
튜터 교정 답변

I made some sentences to answer my teacher's questions. Actually when I start to make them, at first it is not easy. I don't know how I speak my thoughts in english. But, after I make just one sentences, I can make a pharagrah very quickly. What a interesting! However, I'm not sure that I can speak english without making sentences before speaking. I think I need more practices. I expect myself to speak what I think in english simultaneously

 

I made some sentences to answer my teachers questions.

It wasnt easy making sentences in english at first.

I dont know how to express my thoughts in english.

Once I start making sentences then paragraphs seem to form easier.

I think I need more practice.

I hope to be able to express my thoughts and opions clearly in english with out hesitation.

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