Describing the office
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Title : Describing the office
I work in 27th story of thirty story building. Two buildings are stood for HQ side by side.
30th story is for CEO. Mostly, Employees don't need to go up there. Even they don't want to go.
26th story is cafeteria. It shows beautiful scenery like the Han river, Nam-san mountain. I think the scenery is the one of the most fantastic scenery among the same kind companies.
There is another cafeteria in the first basement. Employees can choose food around twenty different kinds. At the lunch time, the elevator and the cafeteria crowded with a wave of people.
Sometimes I pass my lunch not willing to go into the chaos.
I work in 27th story of thirty story building. Two buildings are stood for HQ side by side.
30th story is for CEO. Mostly, Employees don't need to go up there. Even they don't want to go.
26th story is cafeteria. It shows beautiful scenery like the Han river, Nam-san mountain. I think the scenery is the one of the most fantastic scenery among the same kind companies.
There is another cafeteria in the first basement. Employees can choose food around twenty different kinds. At the lunch time, the elevator and the cafeteria crowded with a wave of people.
Sometimes I pass my lunch not willing to go into the chaos.
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