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Red flowers do not last for 10 days, Man do not be liked for 100 days

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Title : Red flowers do not last for 10 days, Man do not be liked for 100 days

In Korean proverb, There is saying that Red flowers do not last for 10 days, Man do not be liked for 100 days.
That means flowers can not maintain their beauty for 10 days, and also people can not be liked forever even if however you like them now.
We meet a lot of people while we go through our living in the society.
Sometimes, you may be down for the disappointing by the people you may trusted.
But It is natural and you may also disappoint somebody.
So we have to be careful on our behavior and we don't have to be so keen on other's behavior.
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Title : Red flowers do not last for 10 days, Man do not be liked for 100 days In Korean proverb, There is saying that Red flowers do not last for 10 days, Man do not be liked for 100 days. That means flowers can not maintain their beauty for 10 days, and also people can not be liked forever even if however you like them now. We meet a lot of people while we go through our living in the society. Sometimes, you may be down for the disappointing by the people you may trusted. But It is natural and you may also disappoint somebody. So we have to be careful on our behavior and we don't have to be so keen on other's behavior.

There is a Korean proverb which says "Red flowers do not last for 10 days, man cannot be liked for 100 days." This means flowers cannot maintain their beauty 10 days and people cannot be liked forever even if you like them now. We meet a lot of people in life. Sometimes we are disappointed by people who we trusted. This is normal and you may also disappoint someone. So we have to be careful of our behavior and not so focused on other's behavior.

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