Trip to seaside
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went to seaside with my wife from last Friday night to Saturday afternoon.
Boosan is very nice place to enjoy the active energy from young generation, I mean youth.
Boosan has a lot of tourist attractions, I select Gwang-an beach because I have a good memory on the beach. I made a reservation at private house rental, and lodged at there. In front of the beach, beaufiful suspension bridge is transporting vehicles what has double deck, I mean upper lane and lower lane. Through the night, we took a nice picture with the bridge in the background. My wife like to take a picture in the nature, especially about flower. But she also enjoy take a picture of my family. As you know, me and my wife are long-distance couple so we have to have a good time by journey.
By the way, what is difference with trip and journey? and travel?
Boosan is very nice place to enjoy the active energy from young generation, I mean youth.
Boosan has a lot of tourist attractions, I select Gwang-an beach because I have a good memory on the beach. I made a reservation at private house rental, and lodged at there. In front of the beach, beaufiful suspension bridge is transporting vehicles what has double deck, I mean upper lane and lower lane. Through the night, we took a nice picture with the bridge in the background. My wife like to take a picture in the nature, especially about flower. But she also enjoy take a picture of my family. As you know, me and my wife are long-distance couple so we have to have a good time by journey.
By the way, what is difference with trip and journey? and travel?
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