Enjoy movie by mobile phone
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학생 제출 원문
I saw the movie during trip from my home to working city by bus.
It is very useful to see some movie in the bus, because I can download several movies in my mobile phone. I made a download at my home where installed the wifi. The telecommunication company provide some movies without further charging. When I connect the wifi with my mobile phone, I can enjoy and download without dara commnication fee.
Furthermore, watching movies with mobile phone helps me when I get a long trip over 3 hours. I usually enjoy movie during triop by bus. Then I can free from boring.
But this action has bad effect on my hearing organ. Due to wide noise from big vehicle and high speed on express way, I have to booste up the sound level from head set. That's why my hearing organ get a big stress. If I use this system at everyday, then I maybe loose my hearing ability in short period. So I made rule, that is, I have to enjoy the movie by mobile phone in the bus just one time per week.
It is very useful to see some movie in the bus, because I can download several movies in my mobile phone. I made a download at my home where installed the wifi. The telecommunication company provide some movies without further charging. When I connect the wifi with my mobile phone, I can enjoy and download without dara commnication fee.
Furthermore, watching movies with mobile phone helps me when I get a long trip over 3 hours. I usually enjoy movie during triop by bus. Then I can free from boring.
But this action has bad effect on my hearing organ. Due to wide noise from big vehicle and high speed on express way, I have to booste up the sound level from head set. That's why my hearing organ get a big stress. If I use this system at everyday, then I maybe loose my hearing ability in short period. So I made rule, that is, I have to enjoy the movie by mobile phone in the bus just one time per week.
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