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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 17 조회 14015

weather words

작성자: 72662 담당 튜터: Cort1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. disaster
Every summer some places happen to be a disaster region because of heavy typhoon.

2. devastation
Such disasters like typhoon, flood and drought cause to bring devastation to the region.

3. tumultuous
I couldn't sleep well because of the tumultuous thunder last night.

4. overcast
The weather is overcast right now, but it will be clear in the afternoon.
튜터 교정 답변

1. disaster: Every summer some places happen to be a disaster region because of heavy typhoons. 2. devastation: Such disasters like typhoons, floods, and droughts bring devastation to the region. 3. tumultuous: I couldn't sleep well because of the tumultuous thunder last night. 4. overcast The weather is overcast right now, but it will be clear in the afternoon.

 

Very good! I made a couple of little corrections, but overall, you did very well.

-Cort

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