scenery, pedestrian, traffic jam, awning
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. scenery
The scenery around this area is very modern and innovative.
2. pedestrian
This area is kind of business district so there are not that many pedestrians during the working hours.
3. traffic jam
There is a traffic jam for rush hour everywhere in Seoul.
4. awning
I normally carry a parasol for an awning in Summer season because of avoiding ultraviolet rays.
The scenery around this area is very modern and innovative.
2. pedestrian
This area is kind of business district so there are not that many pedestrians during the working hours.
3. traffic jam
There is a traffic jam for rush hour everywhere in Seoul.
4. awning
I normally carry a parasol for an awning in Summer season because of avoiding ultraviolet rays.
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