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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 22 조회 13216

leisure, relax, participate, downtime

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1. leisure
I like to watch movies in my leisure time.

2. relax
Taking a walk for a while can help me relax and remove my stress.

3. particapate
Sometimes there is a family gathering on the weekends and I have to participate.

4. downtime
I need a little downtime on the weekends in order to get ready to work back.
튜터 교정 답변

1. leisure I like to watch movies in my leisure time. 2. relax Taking a walk for a while can help me relax and remove my stress. 3. particapate Sometimes there is a family gathering on the weekends and I have to participate. 4. downtime I need a little downtime on the weekends in order to get ready to go back to work.

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