Self Introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is Lee Kwangseok. I am 42 yerars old.
I live in Yong-In city. Where is a residential area.
I am married. I have fathered two wonderful children.
My wife beautiful and graceful.
She is likes cooking. She was always cooking for us.
She take care of children and the house work.
My daughter is 9 years old. She goes to elemantary school.
She is pretty and shy.
My son is 5 years old. He goes to kindergarten.
He is energetic and he is like outside activities.
I started to work in Samsung SDS since 2000, For 14 years.
I think I work really hard but I enjoy my job.
My job is in sales. I am salesman.
I graduated from Kangnam university. My major is mechanical enginering.
I am outgoing and like to meet new peolpe.
I live in Yong-In city. Where is a residential area.
I am married. I have fathered two wonderful children.
My wife beautiful and graceful.
She is likes cooking. She was always cooking for us.
She take care of children and the house work.
My daughter is 9 years old. She goes to elemantary school.
She is pretty and shy.
My son is 5 years old. He goes to kindergarten.
He is energetic and he is like outside activities.
I started to work in Samsung SDS since 2000, For 14 years.
I think I work really hard but I enjoy my job.
My job is in sales. I am salesman.
I graduated from Kangnam university. My major is mechanical enginering.
I am outgoing and like to meet new peolpe.
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