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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 24 조회 12944

Hambuger

작성자: 1100753914 담당 튜터: Jeff2
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Tonight
now i visited lotte store to buy three hamburgers because the store provide sales util tomorrow.
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Tonight now i visited lotte store to buy three hamburgers because the store provide sales util tomorrow.

Tonight, I visited Lotte to buy three hamburgers because the store had sales until tomorrow.

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