A letter to my friend who is suffering from offensive commentary over the internet.

Hey, Guy!

I heard that you got hurt from the offensive replies on your blog.

I know that you are professional in the finance area and all your opinions are right.

However, there are a lot of people all over the world and their opinions are different based on their own views.

So, I think that you need not consider about their replies seriously.

Additionally, I want to recommend you not to open your personal information or issues.

As you know, there are so many people that use others' info illegally nowdays.

I hope you'll heal soon.

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This is really good! Your sentence structure is strong and you offered consolation and advice. One thing to note:

-There're isn't a word in English. We say it in spoken English, but we can't write it. Also in spoken English, we'll use "there's" even when it's incorrect, just because it's shorter. Just be aware of this. Thanks so much for the good piece of work! Talk to you soon!