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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 06. 26 조회 14077

No Ghost Day

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Joselin1
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Title : No Ghost Day

I slept in my new house June 24th for the first time after the contraction.
Because my mother believed in the No Ghost Day (This is my translation in Korean that may fit best to the actual meaning)
In Korea, the nineth and tenth days in lunar calendar are the day that ghosts are not walking around. If the number of the day is 1 or 2, the ghosts come from the east. If the number is 3 or 4, the ghosts come from the south. If the number is 5 or 6, the ghosts come from the west. If the number is 7 or 8, the ghosts come from the north. So, People usually choose that day as the day of marriage, opening restaurant, moving a new house. If you move to a new house at that day, you will be free from the bordering of the ghosts.
Krean calendar shows the lunar day under the number of solar calendar.
Living in Korea is so fatigue due to even considering the ghosts.
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Title : No Ghost Day I slept in my new house June 24th for the first time after the contraction. Because my mother believed in the No Ghost Day (This is my translation in Korean that may fit best to the actual meaning) In Korea, the nineth and tenth days in lunar calendar are the day that ghosts are not walking around. If the number of the day is 1 or 2, the ghosts come from the east. If the number is 3 or 4, the ghosts come from the south. If the number is 5 or 6, the ghosts come from the west. If the number is 7 or 8, the ghosts come from the north. So, People usually choose that day as the day of marriage, opening restaurant, moving a new house. If you move to a new house at that day, you will be free from the bordering of the ghosts. Krean calendar shows the lunar day under the number of solar calendar. Living in Korea is so fatigue due to even considering the ghosts.

 

No Ghost Day. I slept in my new house, for the first time, on June the 24th. This was after finalizing the contract and because my mother believes in the No Ghost Day. In Korea, the 9th and 10th days of the Lunar Calendar are the days that ghosts are not walking around. If it is the 1st or 2nd day, the ghosts come from the east. If it is the 3rd or 4th day, the ghosts come from the south. If it is the 5th or 6th day, they come from the west. And lastly, if it is the 7th or 8th day of the Lunar Calendar, the ghosts come from the north. So, people usually choose the 9th and 10th day to get married, open a restaurant or move into a new house. If you move in to a new house on those days, you will be free from ghosts occupying your home. The Korean calendar shows the lunar day under the number of the Solar Calendar. Living in Korea can be tiring due to trying to avoid the ghosts.

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