Please check my sentences grammatically
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I afraid that "Rich-poor gab" will be wider.
In the future, the technology will be more develop,
the rich just "buy" technology like the robots which can clean the house and wash dishes.. "not employ" people.
That's why there is the risk the rich are richer, other people are poorer in the future.
AI give many conveniences to people for example that people don't need to do some risk works like making high building.
There is only thing that robots can't replace people.
That is "emotion and sympathy".
I mean some jobs that need emotion and sympathy like consultants or counslers can't replaced by AI.
When I feel tired while driving, I want to be inveted automatical car.
AI program can effect my current job.
AS you know, I make a report every day, I need much information if I want to make a report correctly. I'm sure that the progaram is good at gathring information better than me. That's why I have to do something that program can't, like emotional thing as I told you.
In the future, the technology will be more develop,
the rich just "buy" technology like the robots which can clean the house and wash dishes.. "not employ" people.
That's why there is the risk the rich are richer, other people are poorer in the future.
AI give many conveniences to people for example that people don't need to do some risk works like making high building.
There is only thing that robots can't replace people.
That is "emotion and sympathy".
I mean some jobs that need emotion and sympathy like consultants or counslers can't replaced by AI.
When I feel tired while driving, I want to be inveted automatical car.
AI program can effect my current job.
AS you know, I make a report every day, I need much information if I want to make a report correctly. I'm sure that the progaram is good at gathring information better than me. That's why I have to do something that program can't, like emotional thing as I told you.
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