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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 07. 06 조회 12515

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작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Katharine1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
on this year, 1st of Junuary, I went to the top of our house with my family.
We watched sunrise and pray for this year.. like that we gonna be better than before.

We wanted to see sunset, but unfortunately our car was broken down.
That's why we had to rent another car.
But when we arrived there, It was already night.
So we couldn't see sunset.
However, We could make good memories like delicious food and interesting talking.

March 4th in this year was my one-year anniversary for my job.
I got surprise from my seniors.
Happy first anniversary that I joined our company.

He put me while running by kidding.
But when I fell down, my wrist was broken.
If my wrist is sick, maybe I will go to my friend who pushed me to push him.

One of my friend.. he called his girlfriend as his ex-girlfriend.

We printed out the answer on very small paper to cheat the exam.
튜터 교정 답변

on this year, 1st of Junuary, I went to the top of our house with my family. We watched the sunrise and prayed for this year.. likehoping that we gonna be better than before. We wanted to see sunset, but unfortunately our car was broken down. That's why we had to rent another car. But when we arrived there, It was already night. So we couldn't see sunset. However, We could make good memories like eating delicious food and interesting talkingtalking about interesting things. March 4th in this year was my one-year anniversary for my job. I got a surprise from my seniors. Happy first anniversary that I joined our company. He pushed me while running, kiddingly. But when I fell down, my wrist was broken. If my wrist is sick, maybe I will go to my friend who pushed me to push him. One of my friend.. he called his girlfriend as his ex-girlfriend. We printed out the answer on very small paper to cheat the exam.

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