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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
on this year, 1st of Junuary, I went to the top of our house with my family.
We watched sunrise and pray for this year.. like that we gonna be better than before.
We wanted to see sunset, but unfortunately our car was broken down.
That's why we had to rent another car.
But when we arrived there, It was already night.
So we couldn't see sunset.
However, We could make good memories like delicious food and interesting talking.
March 4th in this year was my one-year anniversary for my job.
I got surprise from my seniors.
Happy first anniversary that I joined our company.
He put me while running by kidding.
But when I fell down, my wrist was broken.
If my wrist is sick, maybe I will go to my friend who pushed me to push him.
One of my friend.. he called his girlfriend as his ex-girlfriend.
We printed out the answer on very small paper to cheat the exam.
We watched sunrise and pray for this year.. like that we gonna be better than before.
We wanted to see sunset, but unfortunately our car was broken down.
That's why we had to rent another car.
But when we arrived there, It was already night.
So we couldn't see sunset.
However, We could make good memories like delicious food and interesting talking.
March 4th in this year was my one-year anniversary for my job.
I got surprise from my seniors.
Happy first anniversary that I joined our company.
He put me while running by kidding.
But when I fell down, my wrist was broken.
If my wrist is sick, maybe I will go to my friend who pushed me to push him.
One of my friend.. he called his girlfriend as his ex-girlfriend.
We printed out the answer on very small paper to cheat the exam.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!