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[Please read it] Tomorrow's topic that I want to talk

작성자: 1101879170 담당 튜터: Jayme
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi Jayme.
I am really sorry about that I cannot explain my thought well in english
because my english skill is too bad so you may be feeling difficult to talk with me.

So I decided to prepare next day's conversation.

So tomorrow,

Can We talk about our "dream" tomorrow following today?

Actually, I have many stories I want to talk to you.

And I would like to listen your stories
about your dreams or goals that you want to do in your life.

So. I will prepare my stories.

I really appreciate you listening carefully every day even though my speaking is not good.

And I will be hoping to talk with you tomorrow.

See you next day and have a good day.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Jayme. I am really sorry about that I cannot explain my thought well in english because my english skill is too bad so you may be feeling difficult to talk with me. So I decided to prepare next day's conversation. So tomorrow, Can We talk about our "dream" tomorrow following today? Actually, I have many stories I want to talk to you. And I would like to listen your stories about your dreams or goals that you want to do in your life. So. I will prepare my stories. I really appreciate you listening carefully every day even though my speaking is not good. And I will be hoping to talk with you tomorrow. See you next day and have a good day.

I am going to re-write your message. Okay? Please take note of the slips that you had.

Hi, Jayme!

I am really sorry about what happened earlier. I could not express myself well in English. The knowledge that I have is not enough and it would be difficult for you to understand me. So, I decided to prepare for our next class. Is it okay if we will talk about dreams tomorrow? Actually, I have a lot of things to share to you and I also want to know your dreams and goals in life.

I really appreciate your efforts in trying to listen to me even though I am not good. I am hoping to talk with you again tomorrow. See you and have a good day.

Hi, Houng! I also want to thank you for your eagerness to cooperate in our class. I know it is a bit hard for you but, I also know that you can do it. You just need to practice more and speaking in English often would help you familiarize the language. See you on our next class. Have a good day too! :)

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