From the bed to walking out of the house.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Title : From the bed to walking out of the house.
My phone rings at 5:10 AM. I stretch my arm to the phone, and snooze it for 10 minutes.
After 10 minutes, when the phone rings again, I snooze it again.
After two or three times of wrestling with the phone, I elect my body hardly from the bed.
I don't have a shower in the morning, because I did it last night.
Instead, I just wash my hair in no time, and shave with the electric shaver.
After shaving, I adjust a lotion on the face before drying the hair with the dryer.
Because I think that the sooner I adjust the lotion, the better the skin preserve the water balance.
After that, I make the hair with a hair wax. Finally I spray the hair with a hairspray to fix it.
All of the process is done for 15 minutes just in an underwear every morning.
My phone rings at 5:10 AM. I stretch my arm to the phone, and snooze it for 10 minutes.
After 10 minutes, when the phone rings again, I snooze it again.
After two or three times of wrestling with the phone, I elect my body hardly from the bed.
I don't have a shower in the morning, because I did it last night.
Instead, I just wash my hair in no time, and shave with the electric shaver.
After shaving, I adjust a lotion on the face before drying the hair with the dryer.
Because I think that the sooner I adjust the lotion, the better the skin preserve the water balance.
After that, I make the hair with a hair wax. Finally I spray the hair with a hairspray to fix it.
All of the process is done for 15 minutes just in an underwear every morning.
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