update, privacy, catch up, trending
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. update
These days many people spend a lot of time on the Internet, so they make status updates on their Facebook quite often.
2. privacy
More and more we use Social Networking Sites, we'll lose our privacy on the Internet.
3. catch up
Social networking is a great way to catch up with other people.
4. trends/trending
If we search Social Networking Sites just for an hour, we'll know soon how they are trending.
These days many people spend a lot of time on the Internet, so they make status updates on their Facebook quite often.
2. privacy
More and more we use Social Networking Sites, we'll lose our privacy on the Internet.
3. catch up
Social networking is a great way to catch up with other people.
4. trends/trending
If we search Social Networking Sites just for an hour, we'll know soon how they are trending.
튜터 교정 답변
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