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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 07. 13 조회 13512

recycle, environment, conservation, pollution

작성자: 72662 담당 튜터: Cort1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. reduce, reuse, recycle
Korea's recycling system is well organized and there are certain rules that you should follow.

2. the environment
We have to do recycling in order to make our environment cleaner.

3. conservation
I try to use my tumbler for the environment conservation while I'm drinking water or coffee.

4. pollution
A lot of waste can cause water and soil pollution.
튜터 교정 답변

1. reduce, reuse, recycle Korea's recycling system is well organized and there are certain rules that you should follow. 2. the environment We have to recycle in order to make our environment cleaner. 3. conservation I try to use my tumbler to conserve the environemnt while I'm drinking water or coffee. 4. pollution A lot of waste can cause water and soil pollution.

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