Theater
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I usually go to a theater called Yong-In CGV
It is located in Yong-In.
It takes about 10 minutes from my houes.
I usually go there by a car
The theater is on the 7th floor in a building
The tiket office on the 4 floor.
3~4(Three or four ???) people work there.
They wear uiforms, they are very kind and friendly.
I can see a snack bar. There I can buy water,poncorn and drinks
I can see posters on the wall, brochures,a game center.
There many table and chairs. there, peolpe wait for movie.
It is very close to my house and it is the biggest in my town
There are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and bars.
There is convenient public transportation and a big parking lot.
It is always clean, big and maintained
I have a membership card, I get a discount and gain point
It is located in Yong-In.
It takes about 10 minutes from my houes.
I usually go there by a car
The theater is on the 7th floor in a building
The tiket office on the 4 floor.
3~4(Three or four ???) people work there.
They wear uiforms, they are very kind and friendly.
I can see a snack bar. There I can buy water,poncorn and drinks
I can see posters on the wall, brochures,a game center.
There many table and chairs. there, peolpe wait for movie.
It is very close to my house and it is the biggest in my town
There are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and bars.
There is convenient public transportation and a big parking lot.
It is always clean, big and maintained
I have a membership card, I get a discount and gain point
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